AUTHOR IN PROGRESS

I dont believe I did well on the writing test because I didnt answer the questions in a paragraph. In order for me to improve I would have to reread the story many many times so then I would understand it a little more then I use to, and also I would reread the questions.

Team vocab

The team vocab is about the vocab used to explain the presidential debate.This years presidential debate was very aggravating.Donald trumps words were very venomous towards Hillary Clinton. Neither of them were stolid and hypnotizing towards the audience.i really want Hilary and Donald trump to dissolve from the presidential election because we wont be able to suspend the transformation that the US is about to experience.Donald trump constantly accusing Hilary about her emails. No one anticipated that there argument would be so weak.When they were arguing i thought  my capularties were about to burst of anger .

LETTER TO A MENTOR DRAFT 1

Dear mentor:

I have so many questions to ask you .One of my maine question was why are their so many wierd random holidays that we didnt even know exist? Like  National Chocolate Covered Raisins Day,Pecan Day, Make Up Your Own Holiday Day,National Fun Day/ Fun at Work Day. I don't know about you but i believe they are some weird ass holidays. I don't know why i picked this question but i did. I hope you can help me answer my big question .

vocabulary #5

1. venomous- secreting venom
2. stolid- calm,dependable
3. hypnotized- produce a state of hypnosis
4. suspended-temporarily prevent from continuing 
5. transformed-make a thorough 
6. accuse- charge with an offense 
7. anticipate- regard as proharable
8. fringe- an ornamental border 
9. melancholy- a feeling of pensive sadness
10. earnestly- fervent,intent
11. dissolve- become or cause 
12. aggravate- make worse or more serious
13. illuminate- light up
14. capillary- any of the fine branching blood vessels 
15. proboscis- the nose of a mammal

RESPECT MY AUTHORITY

when i am walking past by a police officer or see a police car i always say hi to them because i am thankful for what they do to keep us safe even though their are times that they mess up and shoot people when they can do something else but i believe they mess up because they are afraid to .

Inciting incident and beyond

The incident was that Mr.Leonardo got stopped and arrested for just walking and getting fresh air .

The Pedestrian

My first impression of the story the pedestrian i though it had interesting details .